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August 22, 2005

the Death of Santiago Nasar

Although I haven't yet read Gabriel García Márquez' most known novel, One Hundred Years of Solitude, I have read his other novels and short stories (there are plenty to choose from!). Perhaps like most of you, this was my first time reading Chronicle of a Death Foretold. I'd read and heard many reviews and many plot summaries on CoaDF. Thinking that I knew what to expect (although still excited about reading it), CoaDF took me by surprise and made me forget completely what I expected to read.

For an introduction, I would like to know what you thought about Chronicle of a Death Foretold.
One of the shortest novels we've read, I feel like it covered enough background information on the characters to make it a longer novel had it been written differently.
What did you all think of the way the story was executed?
Was your attention held throughout the story?
Were you bothered by the "anti-mystery" tool in this story?

Chronicle of a Death Foretold is a story about honor, tradition, irresistible violence, and the "psychology of mass complicity." (source: publisher 1999 edition?) Repetition is also often seen throughout. Aside from that, I feel that on a smaller scale, it deals with a lack of and learned love and mass consequence (since Angela is one of the main characters, i think it's somewhat significant what happens in her life in the years to come). GGM is one of the many Latin American writers that falls into the area of Magical Realism and Chronicle of a Death Foretold does not fall short of that. The following are some of my favorite lines throughout the novel which demonstrate the Magical Realism throughout the novel :

p. 37 "'He was healthier than the rest of us, but when you listened with the stethoscope, you could hear the tears bubbling inside his heart.'" (on widower Xius dying of sadness)

p. 46 "...and saw Bayardo San Román in the glow of the street light, his silk shirt unbuttoned and his fancy pants held up by elastic suspenders. 'He had that green color of dreams.'" (on BSR returning his bride)

p. 47 'She only took the time necessary to say the name...and she nailed it to the wall with her well-aimed dart, like a butterfly with no will whose sentence has always been written." (on Angela naming her perpetrator)

The way that the story was written was very successful. The tone in this story was meant to be that of a journalistic investigation and GGM's exection succeeded in that. Often times, I felt as one with the narrator, who is left unnamed--not even a last name is given. Leaving the narrator unnamed contributed to my feeling like the one doing the investigation. At the same time that the narrator is gathering all the information and accounts to make some sense of the death of Santiago Nasar, so are we.

Throughout the story, all of the characters' accounts and details differ in perspective, yet they coincide. This is one of the things that helped in keeping the story interesting for me (not that it wasn't!). For example, on p. 56, the Colonel tells the narrator that he remembered that that morning it began to rain, which coincides with earlier accounts about a thin drizzle. What mainly kept the story interesting for me was the way the story was written. I really liked how the story went in and out of the events leading to the death of Santiago to tells us about the background of some of the characters and what becomes of the characters in the years after Santiago's death.

The anti-mystery tool actually became the mystery tool. We know how the main character, Santiago, ends up. Dead. We know who kills him and why and how and when. The purpose the narrator sets out for and the tone of the novel become the driving force is wanting to find out about the events that lead to his death. That is the mystery.

Santiago Nasar: I suppose the ultimate question is, "Was he guilty???" There was no evidence, yet Angela's brothers stick to he answer. Even the narrator himself doubts Santiago's culpability. What is interesting about this is that because the narrator was friends with Santiago and he doubts his culpability, this doesn't distract us from considering Victoria Guzmán and her daughter Divina Flor's strong feelings against Santiago.

Angela Vicario: Was she lying??? If she was, why? I feel that she deserved some kind of punishment for mercilessly allowing her brothers to kill Santiago. Okay, she couldn't have done anything. Women are powerless and men have the final say (in this context!). But she didn't even show any kind of pity or guilt after Santiago's death, not even to the narrator while telling her side of the story. Maybe her punishment was that she fell in love with BSR after all... (that's it??)

Narrator: What is his purpose of gathering the details of the crime? of the chronicle? Why wait that long? What I think is that it was just one of those things that happens in life when at the moment of an event, one just takes in what has happened and it's not until years pass and one is still thinking about it that one finally decides to find out what happens exactly. I don't think there was a real purpose for the narrator waiting so long or longer before he went about his investigation. I think that makes the story even more so relative to the reader.

"Then he...fell on his face in the kitchen." What an image! There couldn't have been a more perfect way to end this. GGM's technique in writing the story allowed for the ending to be such. I couldn't have felt a louder thud!



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The first thing I thought of was a sociology/psychology term, diffusion of responsibility. It draws its basis from the Kitty Genovese murder case where an entire apt. building full of people more or less witnessed her murder (aurally) and didn't even call the police. Basically, research has shown that people have a tendency to "diffuse" responsibility. In short, the more of us there are, the greater the tendency to believe that "someone else will do it." Thinking of this, I feel that this is a pretty shocking novel, not in terms of violence or gore, but more in the lack of social responsibility. I couldn't help but wonder, is this a true commentary on human society? After all, research has proven people's tendency to shirk responsibility.
Also, I couldn't help thinking of "Memento," especially in how, at the beginning, the crime has already been committed and the narrator is trying to trace the incidents leading up to the murder.

I read CoaDF for a literature class a few years ago, but it wasn't until re-reading it for this discussion that I remembered why I love GGM.

By creating an "anti-mystery", GGM actually created more suspense & certainly more drama. I enjoyed re-discovering all of the characters. As Enygma pointed out, this can used a social commentary, as there were few "innocent" people in the story, but yet there's a feeling of justice somehow when the Vicario brothers are imprisoned. But, I must admit that it was the hope of perhaps finding just ONE person who would be "innocent" [read: responsible] that kept me turning the pages.

There are some open-ended questions left in the story, such as why the narrator is so connected to the townspeople in the story, yet did not investigate the murder for about 20 years?

Enygma, CoaDF also reminds me of Memento because of the way it moves through time. CoaDF's plot structure is nothing short of genius, in my opinion. The first sentence tells us that Santiago would be killed and the story ends with his very last breath.

Paula, I agree that the anti-mystery creates more drama. This book was a page-turner for me because I kept wanting to know what would happen next even though I already knew. The characters were incredibly rich and meeting them feels like you're winding through the streets of the town.

Ana, CoaDF is the best book I've read this year.

First I have to say that I loved this novel. I was first introduced to Marquez a few years ago by reading One Hundred Years of Solitude (OYOS). It was confusing at first but a great read. For those of you who read it, did you notice how some characters from that book were in Chronicle?

General Petronio san Roman, father of the groom and hero of the civil wars of the past was the one who ordered Gerineldo Marquez (OYOS) to be shot. He also fought Colonel Aureliano Buendia, another character from (OYOS).

I love the fact that these books take place in the same universe, situated in the same area.

Does anyone have any guesses as to who Angela Vicario's lover was? My money's on Father Amador. Mainly because the word "amador" means lover.

I understand what you mean, enygma. but i would also like to point out that the majority of the citizens did nothing because they felt that the act was justified, as opposed to people not doing anything because they think that "someone will do something". in a culture where a family's honor is one of the most important, sacred, and respected qualities that a family can have, killing the man that tainted this honor was rightly justified. of course, there were those who tried to save santiago by doing something, like clotilde, yamil, and cristo. i'm not saying that Diffusion of Responsibility doesn't take place...but there those who certainly did not care that santiago was going to be killed.

hmmm, i don't know. i didn't feel that justice like paula mentions once the vicario brothers were jailed. the reason i say that is because had santiago really been guilty, his murder was over the top and three years of jail was not enough punishment for a crime that violent. i'm sure that part of the reason for their sentence being so little is because of the standards that everyone in town holds on to: family's honor and being a virgin until wedding night. so, personally, i don't think that justice was served. and often times these things do happen.

steph, GGM has created a world, Macondo, where characters come and go, leave and visit other novels. i love that! it reminds me of The Stupidest Angel. i remember something being said throughout the discussion how the author has characters that are overlapped in some of his other novels. oh, and i find it so interesting--your hypothesis on father amador!

i'm glad that you liked CoaDF, mary! :-)

please excuse my typos in the main entry! i thought i corrected them

Ana, my view of justice was from the perspective of the townsfolk, based on their values. The brothers taking the life of an "innocent" man would get them a harsher punishment here, but in their town, they committed a "bad", in order to restore a "good" [Angela's honour]. Truth be told, I held Angela just as responsible for Santiago's murder. As the story progressed, I kept wondering whether or not she was telling the truth.

I think it's interesting that the narrator finds just a few people in the town, who show that Santiago is not necessarily an "innocent". His reputation as a "ladies' man" made him an easy target, but I think he may've been innocent of the "crime".

Btw - I love the hypothesis re: Father Amador also! If he were the "criminal", then it would make sense that Angela could not disclose his name, because there were sins committed on multiple levels with that scenario, as opposed to being taken advantage of by Santiago.

Like Paula, I also viewed the justice issue from the perspective of Angela. I doubted the veracity of her claim from the start but could not figure out why she would lie about such a thing and permit an innocent (at least of that particular crime) receive capital punishment. I held her primarily responsible for Santiago's murder but was baffled about why she perpetrated such a harsh lie with such harsh consequences. The possibility of Father Amador as her lover makes perfect sense to me now! It reminds me of the secret of the priest's illegitimate child in A Prayer for Owen Meany. There the narrator's mother got pregnant by the local priest in a small town and refused to divulge the father's identity. She chose to protect him from the consequences but left her son parentless after she was accidently killed. Here Angela chose to protect her first love at the cost of another's life. Was it worth the cost? I was hoping Angela would answer that question towards the end of the book.

On the community issues, not only does the community fail to stop the murder of Santiago but also fails to punish Angela for causing the murder of an innocent. From a justice perspective, it seems there are some serious problems with the social conscience of this community, but the family honor-virginity issue appears to outweigh that. It actually a current issue in places like Pakistan and and Iraq.

Found some other things that might make the story make more sense. Marquez uses a lot of names with religious connections.

Santiago is the patron saint of Spain and was killed for his faith, essentially a martyr.

The word Nasar I though might echo Nazareth but that seems like stretching it.

Angela's last name Vicario = vicarious.

Pedro = peter
pablo = paul

Faustino Santos (the butcher) = faust who sold his soul to the devil. That would at least explain why he stood by and did nothing.

Placida = placid

Victoria Guzman = victorious? (keeping nasar from laying his hands on her daughter)

Magdalena Oliver = Mary Magdalen

Widower Xius = Zeus? house on the hill = Olympus?

I also like the descriptions about how the death was inevitable.

The door at the front, the one nasar exited from was known as "the fatal door" - named after a dime store novle.

How Hortensia Baute saw blood on the pig knives before nasar was killed.

Pablo says "there's no way out of this. it's as if it already happened."

Someone also says "you always have to take the side of the dead" though I can't remember who it is.

So it seems that because of society's complacence, nasar had to die, it was inevitable. But did it really punish society. I think there's one page (97?) where bad things happen to everybody who just let it happen. Perhaps that's the punishment for letting nasar be killed.

Amy, when I first read the novel I hoped for *some* sense of remorse or anything really from Angela for causing the death of Santiago. When I re-read it, I believed that she was simply echoing the values she'd learned.

As Steph reminds us, Santiago's death was inevitable & apparently so was each character's participation in his death.

Steph, the "you always have to take the side of the dead" quote was perhaps the most ironic to me. The narrator's mother had made the remark, because she was caught in the middle of loyalty to a friend, or to a relative. In any case, I thought it was quite ironic that she made a statement that seemed to be some sort of axiom, yet Santiago was condemned before he was killed.

Another religious connection w/names: Divina Flor = Divine Flower

To me, I do believe that each character's life at the end of the novel is a result of his/her actions leading up to Santiago's murder. I think there is an idea that God is the only judge of humans & only God can take/give life, so when the brothers & the townspeople decided to end Santiago's life, based on a judgement made against them, they were doomed to hell on Earth [for lack of a better description].

Steph,
I liked how you analyzed the names of the various characters. Now the butcher's name is pretty interesting. You already mentioned the connection to Faust, but his last name, is Santos which is the Spanish word for Saint. Then, the butcher's name can be translated as "Saint Faust." I'm not sure exactly what this means, but it's something to think about. :D
RE: Angela's lover. Nice hypothesis. That would certainly explain her reticence.

paula, i see it--justice from the townspeople point of view. it's just kind of hard to separate my perspective from theirs, even if i do understand theirs. you know what i mean? and yes, without a doubt, angela is responsible for santiago's death. she is the protagonist in this story. i wonder why her family never questioned her one name answer..?

amy j, the whole secret affair with the priest...doesn't that happen in the scarlet letter? yes, it does. oh, except he wasn't a priest...

steph, i really like all of the research you've dug up!
so what did santiago die for? the thing is that he wasn't willing to die. he actually tried to escapse, but he found himself trapped. i don't know if that makes him a martyr afterall.


TYPO, TYPO! i meant to say that angela is the ANTAGONIST! not the protagonist. oops!

sigh, there are so many characteres that played important parts, like cristo bedoya and clotilde armenta (she was fausto's wife, right?). there are also more. i tried doing what steph did, looking up meaning of names, but there are just too many names to try to figure out each character.

in my opinion, clotilde played an important part: she yelled to santiago to run home.
oh, there's also yamil, the arab, who tries to go out in santiago's defense with the shot gun.

oh, i almost forgot. as far as santiago's last name goes, nasar--his father was arabic and so he carried his father's last name. but, i'm not sure how that relates to nazareth. still i think that steph was on the right track with nazareth. i found a page (http://essenes.net/nazcall.html#naz) where it talks about the nazarenes and how they "had a period of success but finished up failures and a laughing stock." then, if you scroll all the way down to the paragraph that directly follows the paragraph that begins with "In the Damascus Rule," it says that the word "nasar" means to watch, protect, or keep.

and that does make sense...santiago, as the protagonist, truly is a victim after all! if we take this clue serious, then this is enough to convince me that he was innocent of that crime after all.

(then again, i don't want to get carried away)

Haha! Too bad Santiago didn't have you to represent him Ana!

It was difficult for me to not feel bitter towards the inevitability of Santiago's death. I think that's what made knowing the ending at the beginning a bit hard. At least if you don't really know, then you feel that good will prosper over evil, or something of that nature.

I like the info. from both you & Steph re: Nasar. Santiago's father was a protector/keeper of his family's traditions & values, as was Santiago in his youth. Someone remarked that Santiago had quite an undertaking at such a young age, but managed to succeed all the same.

I just want to say that I greatly admired Clotilde & Yamil in this story. Yamil reacted as I would like to think I'd react, if I learned a friend or someone was in danger; he tried to protect Santiago, but to no avail. Clotilde tried pretty hard as well, once it was clear the brothers were not joking.

"It was difficult for me to not feel bitter towards the inevitability of Santiago's death. I think that's what made knowing the ending at the beginning a bit hard."
Even though I already knew the ending, so to speak, I couldn't help but wish that Santiago hadn't been murdered and that there was another "ending" to all this. Am I making any sense? :\

Th
enygma: I can't believe I missed the butcher's last name! But that makes him seem so much more complex/conflicted but I can't remember him acting as a conflicted character. He must doesn't he?


Paula: I like your idea about God punishing the villagers. I think that can also be tied into the bishop's visit or non-visit. Everyone made such a big deal about him coming off the boat and instead, he just floated on by. Is this, God abandoning the village or punishing them for what they'll do or fail to do when it comes to Santiago.

I do feel bad for Nasar. He does basically seem like a martyr. There was no point in his death. I don't see any evidence that it made the brothers feel better because they gave everyone every opportunity to stop them. They were only doing it out of honour for their sister who was probably shtooping father amador.

"I don't see any evidence that it made the brothers feel better because they gave everyone every opportunity to stop them. They were only doing it out of honour for their sister who was probably shtooping father amador."

Doesn't it say somewhere in the book that both brothers hesitated at different points and that the other took up the leadership position? Does anybody remember what I'm talking about?

yes! i remember! i know what you're talking about. i don't think that they felt any better about it [the brothers]...now that i really think about it. i think that they felt like they HAD to do it--like it was a moral code that everyone lived by, god help he could can't get away. they felt like they couldn't back out.

i still don't think that santiago was a martyr. he never volunteered to die...

i'm with paula in her opinion of yamil. i would've probably reacted in the same way.

knowing that santiago died from the very beginning didn't bother me. and the funny thing is that my opinion of santiago changed as the story went along. what bothered me the most was his innocence...ah, i'm not making sense.
okay, i don't wish there was another ending because...it's what we're given at the very beginning. if someone is dead, we can't change it. unless of course, we're dealing with a story that falls into a fantastical genre or something. i realize, now that steph and enygma brought it up, that the brothers weren't exactly joyful about santiago's death. guess i'm not really mad at them. i'm mostly mad with angela! grr! lol...she's the villain... okay, just kidding. anyway, also, divina flor upset me a little. i remember the narrator mentions that she lied to santiago's mother by telling her that he had come in already and that's why the front door was closed.

okay, so...do we all agree that santiago was innocent afterall? i say yes...what do you all say?

oh, what did you all think of angela's husband? i was kind of suspicious of him. i got the feeling that the narrator wasn't too fond of him. at the same town, the town was? i don't know. i'm somewhat confused there.

and thanks to all of you for having participated! :-)

I don't know what to make of Angela's husband. I suspected him of ... something, anything, because it just seemed strange that he travelled to find a wife, etc. Of course, I only learned things about him from the narrator & the townspeople's narratives. We never really gained much insight into his personality from the husband himself.

When he returns Angela to her mom, he addresses her as "Mother" [I think] & that's a commendable quality, under the circumstances methinks.

But, I don't know if Santiago was innocent, although he didn't appear "guilty", more because of Angela's ommission of details than anything else.

Just wanted to express my dismay at not having read the book. OYOS was directly responsible for me choosing to major in Spanish, and I love GGM. I just totally dropped the ball on this one! Anyhoo, looks like a great conversation. I WILL read it soon.

Steph's breakdown of the names in this book is awesome. Although I paid a lot of attention to names during our discussion of The Ghost Writer, I did not even stop to think about the ones in CoaDF.

I also really liked the narrator's mother's quote about taking the side of the dead. It was interesting how she said it when the narrator's father tried to talk her out of warning Santiago's mother because of their family having ties with both him and Angela. Since she speaks of Santiago as being dead already, it's almost as if she knows her warning won't do any good.

Speaking of names, the only person who could have conceivably stopped the murder is Cristo (Christ), but he finds out too late.

Like Paula, I couldn't figure out what was with Angela's husband. He's obviously old school, but he can't be the first husband to find out his wife isn't a virgin on their wedding night. I'm sure a lot of men would simply cover the whole thing up rather can cause such a stir. And then he shows up years later with a suitcase full of 2,000 unopened letters. Bizarre.

I really enjoyed your discussion on names. When you mentioned the characters coming in and out of the universe, and the comments about the names, Faulkner sprung to mind. It was like a Yoknapatawpha county in South America. I find it amazing how GGM can manage to do this without writing extremely long novels. Short novel, short character description, but nonetheless, he manages to accomplish the creation of a written universe.
I apologize for not directly quoting anything said above, and I found many of the comments interesting. However, my most interesting thought about this novel would be the way GGM uses information. I know there's this conversation about it above, about what information we know. However, in the aspect of the novel, information is so hard to come by. It seems the only real facts are physical. We know Angela is a virgin and we know that Santiago dies. Everything else seems to exist in that blurry world of gossip and a community voice. Do you notice how the voice of the community isn't always truthful? Anyway, I'm thrilled to have found such an interesting group of people and I hope to continue participating! Hope I did everything ok.

i'm still confused about angela's husband as well. at first i thought he was a real traditional "macho" but when he goes to angela at the end with all of her unopened letters...that boggled me. like mary said, that was "bizarre." i didn't trust him, that's for sure. it seems to me that none of the townspeople really gave a concrete notion of angela's husband. it's interesting: he's the catalyst in this story, in the sense that he started the whole hunt for santiago, yet we barely know anything about him and he disappears for most of the story only to come back in the end with unopened letters, after years and years of angela writing to him. that is strange.

okay, for the record, it really isn't known whether santiago is guilty or innocent. and just for the record, i am going to hold him as innocent. the clue to his last name, i took it as, "he's the one to protect and to watch over" because he's the victim here. so, according to me, he is innocent.
:-D

and agreed, steph's work was great!

steve, welcome! you did everything well! glad that you can join us and hope to see you around in the near future. :-)
you're right, GGM can write really great short novels. OHYoS is his only super long novel, i believe. but his short novels and short stories are the best!
GGM can use information very well (due to his first passion, journalism), but u'r right. the only things we know that are real are the physical. and yeah, the voice of the community isn't always truthful. i think that's a reflection on communities in real life, and yet you can always get to a story. it helps to see things from different perspectives.

well, thanks again everyone!

Steve makes an interesting point about information and the role of the community. I've always held the belief that a person is reasonable, logical, and intelligent. However, people are unreasonable, closed-minded, and stupid.

The community in CoaDF clearly experiences a breakdown in communication. The idea that someone should do something about the murder exists in everyone's mind, but then the thoughts turn to "What can I do?" and "What could I have done?" Although it seems like they're communicating, since everyone knows Santiago is going to die, they are actually miscommunicating because nothing is done about it.

Ana, I agree that Bernardo is the catalyst in the story and I also wondered why no one really blamed him for Santiago's death. They blamed Santiago for deflowering Angela, so his death is seen as being his own fault. Like you, I think he's innocent and the real tragedy is that he dies not knowing why.

Hola -
This is my first time joining the book blog. I made the mistake of reading CoaDF, the first time, over a period of several days. After reading your comments this morning, I realized that I hadn't paid close enough attention! So I read it again today, in one sitting.

Here's what I think. GGM uses some very obvious literary devices in this book, and some equally obvious biblical references. So obvious in fact, I can't believe I didn't catch them the first read through.

There are at least three key examples of foreshadowing in the first 20 pages. The most significant is when Santiago is shamed/disgusted/horrified to see Divina Flor throw rabbit guts to the dogs; he tells her not to be "savage" and to "make believe it was a human being". Later, when Santiago staggers back into the kitchen after being enviscerated, she howls that the dogs "want to eat his guts". Was this a literary device or a a religious allegory or both?

What bothers me about the foreshadowing is why does GGM use it when we already know that Santiago is going to die? Other things I noticed is the detail given to what Santiago was wearing on the day of this death; all white linen, described by his mother as being washed in "pure" water. That seems like a biblical reference if ever there was one.

There is tons of "fatalismo" in this book, which is of no surprise given the culture of the author. Example, Santiago has tons of guns but isn't carrying one on the day of this death.

In the description of the murder and the preparation for the murder there are several interesting biblical references. For one, the butchering tools are described as "sacrificial tools". Also, Pablo and Pedro "pierce his sides" with their first two blows. There's more, but you get the idea.

In a larger sense, the whole story is not dissimilar to the crucifixion. Every knew Jesus was going to die, and no one tried to stop it. The difference is, Jesus was aware of and accepting of his fate. Santiago said things that sounded like acceptance of fate (fatalismo), but was clearly caught off guard by it.

As for Angela, I don't know about her lover being the priest. It doesn't seem like GGM ususally makes you dig that deep for meaning in his books. I think there's a lot given away at the part when she tells her brothers that it was Santiago. It says, "She looked for it in the shadows, she found it at first sight among the many, many easily confused names from this world and the other, and she nailed it to the wall, like a butterfly with no will whose sentence has always been written."

To me, this passage seemed to indicate that she may have had many lovers, or perhaps many men who abused her. Angela was described as pretty, and slow ("booby"). Stories of vulnerable, and abused women are on the news every day. It says she was born with the umbilical cord tied around her throat, which was interpreted by other characters in the book as a good thing, but probably meant she was actually slightly brain damaged. Her mother is described as very strict, but also as never going out of the house. Her father was blind. Isn't it possible that Angela wasn't actually looked after that carefully?

Finally, I think that Bayardo was gay. People in the story thought he was on first impression. He was slim, well dressed and cultured. He threw a lavish party, that sounds like he planned himself. He made the decision to marry, like others would make a business decision. There was no discussion of him dating or sleeping with the "pleasurable mulatto girls" like most of the other young men in this story. Maybe he wanted a "slow" wife so she wouldn't catch on to who he really was. Does this also explain why he showed up on this island unannounced? He went where no one could know of his past?

I'm probably really stretching this, but it also said that when his "sisters" came to collect him after the wedding they made quite a scene. The narrarator says "I remember thinking that distress like theirs could only be put on in order to hide other, greater shames." Granted, this doesn't explain why he showed up on Angela's doorstep 20 years later.

Anyway, I really enjoyed this book on the second reading. Your well thought out comments, fellow readers, convinced me to give it another try.

Happy Labor Day,
Thrasha

wow, thank you, thrasha, for your insight!

a lot of what you say makes SO MUCH sense.
i think i need to read this over. lol
but thank you SO MUCH for your input!

the part where angela searches for the name of her perpetrator, i didn't pay a lot of attention to what it really meant. i just loved the way it was written. but that does make a lot of sense. especially since you point out that her parents may not have really looked out after her...and if she really is a little retarded, then that explains her brother's passionate revenge even better!

thanks!

Hello,
this is my first time writing for the book blog. please disregard any mistakes i make. It does make sence that it could be Father Amador, as steph pionted out. IF Angela was somewhat looked after, the parents, knowing that they were "honor" crazy, they could have known that she was at church and concluded that it was for religious purposes.

Also, I noticed that one sister had died two years before,I think that maybe since Angela was down, it could have been one of their encouters.

This would also explain why the Bishop hated the town so much. As a ritual, people in the little town confess their sins to the priest. Now if the priest had done something bad, he would have to confess it to the Bishop. The Bishop knew what was going on and he disided to stay out of the sinning town by not getting off the boat.

Steph, I liked how you decoded the names. After that it did become obvious that it could have been the priest.

Thanks every body for the input, i was entertained.

 

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